nyt tarviin todella apua! tämä meni mun ymmärryksen yli

[esmeralda]

siis onko mun lauseet kirjoitettu hyvällä enkulla ja jos niissä on virheitä niin korjatkaa:
1. The person, who is really badly get depressed looks world in a different way than the happy person, whose all things are all right.

2. It's really precious thing, that we have a clear water near of our hands on every day, but in spite of we shouldn't waste of water.

3. maybe everyone of us have to experience something dangerous and loose important that we can appreciate life and what the God has given for us as a big gift.

siinä ne tulikin. iso käsi teille ja suuri kiitos avustanne. :flower:

 

[CrystalBlue]

onhan noissa virheitä.. ainkain mun mielestä..

 

[tui]

tai sit jotenkin näin:

1. A person, who is really deeply depressed looks at the world in a different way than a happy person, whose things are all right.

2. It's a really precious thing, that we have clear water every day, but despite of that we shouldn't waste water.

3. maybe everyone of us has to experience something dangerous and loose something important to appreciate life and what God has given us.

 

[esmeralda]

nosto

 

[tui]

niin ja sit menettää kirjoitetaan lose, loose on väljä

 

[olihan tuo]

niin persiillään, en edes jaksa perehtyä, mutta ei kun etiäpäin vaan, kirjoja pänttämään

 

[paraskin puhuja]

niin ja sit menettää kirjoitetaan lose, loose on väljä

loose lose lost näin se menee

 

[v2]

tuin korjaukset oli hyviä

 

[HuliHumppanpuli]

1. Deaply depressed person sees the world in a different way than a non-depressed person.
2. The clear water we have (every day) is relly precious and we shouldn`t waste it.
3. Maybe everyone of us has to experience something bad or loose something important before we can appreciate life and everything God has given us .

=)